Hi Kevin, I liked the video - first time I'd seen a rotary milking parlour in operation. A few observations.
1. Alter the length of the fade transition perhaps, I use a one second fade to get less of a merge mess up most of the time as the default size.
2. Watch the scroll effect in a Title - they need to be quite slow to be seen, read and not get distorted. Streamed video tends to show up this quite a bit. Also you need to be careful with the font selected and size.
3. If you want it punchy with scenes, either use a very very short fade or none at all.
Keep up the good work, the quality was super.